First, let me introduce you to our awesome, spectacular, fabulous, super ninja agent judge!
Drum roll please......
I'm humbled to announce that the judge for this epic contest will be literary agent Suzie Townsend of Fine Print Literary Management!
No, you're not dreaming. It's the real Suzie! I knew you'd be as thrilled as I am to have her! I did an interview with Suzie a while back, which you can find here.
"Suzie represents adult and children’s fiction. She is actively looking to build her adult list and specifically interested in romance (historical and paranormal), and fantasy (urban fantasy, science fiction, steampunk, epic fantasy). She also loves Middle Grade and YA novels (all subgenres, but particularly literary projects)."
And the grand prize for one lucky follower? A FULL MANUSCRIPT REQUEST. You read that right. For the lucky grand prize winner, Suzie Townsend will request a full!
Thank you so much Suzie for offering up such an amazing prize!
One of the hardest things to do as a writer (in my opinion) is to take your beautiful tens-of-thousands of words manuscript and sum it up into a short, succinct summary. A synopsis is a 2(ish) page summary of your book. A query is a three paragraph tantilizing summary of your book. A pitch is a one or two line summary of your book. It's hard. And as Suzie says on her bio, synopses are evil. But, having a concise pitch is really important. How can you expect someone to want to read your book if you can't tell them what it's about in one or two sentences? So, for my contest, I'm asking you to write a Twitter pitch - a 140 character (or less) summary of your book. It's hard, but so much fun (and useful!)
Here are some helpful sites in writing one-sentence pitches:
Nathan Bransford's blog post
Rachelle Gardner's blog post
Query Tracker blog post
Tawna Fenske's blog post
Okay guys - here's the rules:
As this is a contest to celebrate hitting blog follower milestones, to be fair, only followers of my blog or twitter (@Shelley_Watters) are eligible to participate (but you CAN follow me now & enter! :) )
1. Follow my blog and/or twitter (@Shelley_Watters)
2. Sign up for the blogfest using the link below.
3. Spread the word about the contest (via blog/twitter/etc).
3. On April 1st and 2nd, post your 140 character twitter pitch on your blog.
4. Go visit the other contestants and provide comments/critiques on their pitch.
5. On April 3rd, in the comments section of my contest blog, post:
- Title, Genre and Word Count
- Your polished 140 character twitter pitch
- Where you follow me (blog/twitter). Please include your twitter handle.
- Link to where you spread the word (twitter/blog etc)
- Your email address where you can be contacted.
And while we're waiting for Suzie to select a winner, I'll be picking out additional winners to recieve a query critique (from me - not Suzie).
Disclaimer:
- Contest is only open to unagented writers with completed manuscripts.
- You do not need to participate in the critique portion of the contest, but you do need to be a follower and stay within the 140 character limits (I will be checking all entries). But why not use the opportunity to hone and refine that pitch before Suzie looks at it?
Good Luck!

What an awesome contest!
ReplyDeleteThis is an AWESOME contest, Shelley! Thanks so much for the opportunity, I'm super excited :D
ReplyDeleteThis is great! Fingers are crossed!
ReplyDeleteAwesome! Thanks for hosting this. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome contest. How exciting!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your followers... proud to be one of the hoard. Superb contest, Shelley. Wish I had something to enter.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the invitation. Double rainbows and unicorns happy about this.
ReplyDeleteOoo this is awesome Shelley & Suzie!! Congrats on hitting the 100+ mark!!!! And the 500 twitter followers! WOOOOOO!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on hitting 100 and then some! Awesome contest...and I drooled when I saw all of those books....*SIGH*
ReplyDeleteCongrats to you!! And thanks to both you and Suzie for doing this!! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat idea for a contest - Thanks for hosting it. I'm a new follower of your blog - adding to your quickly growing numbers ;)
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My Wonderfully Dysfunctional Blog
Sweet bejeebers this would be great to win. Suzie's on my list but I'm saving her until I've polished all these queries and first lines and what not.
ReplyDeleteI'm totally working on this though, cause every opportunity for critique moves us forward. Thanks Shelley!
Hi Shelley! Jess @ Falling Leaflets sent me your way. What a fabulous contest! Congrats on your follower benchmark ~ :) And thanks to both you and Suzie for this opportunity.
ReplyDeleteI have a children's picture book so I don't think it fits your contest but I'll gladly share with my Twitter followers.
ReplyDeleteSo excited for this. Suzie is such an awesome agent. Thanks for hosting!
ReplyDeleteShelley, I think this ate my last comment, so I'll go ahead and thank you again for hosting this contest.
ReplyDeleteThis should be really fun!
ReplyDeleteHa ha. Seems like everything thinks this is a great idea for a contest. Which it is. ;) Congrats on all those followers!
ReplyDelete#20 FTW! I would love for Suzie to read my work, she's an incredible agent.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds really awesome! Can't wait to try it out!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds amazing! I can't wait to enter and give it a shot :)
ReplyDeleteTruly an amazing contest. We'll all be winners with the pitch crits. :-) Thank you Shelley
ReplyDeleteCongrats on all the new followers! I found you through Twitter and now I'm a follower of your blog.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to this fun contest :)
Christi Corbett
Doah! I forgot to leave a comment. So here it is ... you both are awesome!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a super-mega-awesome contest! Shame I've not a completed ms. :( But will help you spread the word! :)
ReplyDeleteOn second thought...can I join in on the critique round but not the contest? :)
ReplyDeleteJC - you can absolutely join just the critique round if you want! Just don't post the final version on the contest thread on April 3rd. :) Have fun!
ReplyDeleteHey this is an awesome idea!! YAY! :D I'll spread the word! :D
ReplyDeleteWoot! Salivating over this one :D Thanks for hosting such an awesome contest!
ReplyDeleteRebecca
@rebeccatlittle
Great idea! Guessing we have to be more creative than, "My MS is OK", eh?
ReplyDeleteCobra - while yes, that would meet the requirements of the <140 character rule, I'd go with something a little more descriptive of what your book is actually about. ;)
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome! Thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteWow, amazing! I'm definitely in!
ReplyDeleteVery cool contest and having full manuscript request from Suzie Townsend (my agent so no bias at all) is a total score. Wishing everyone lots of luck.
ReplyDeleteVery cool contest! I just realized I linked my main page, but you'll only have to click BLOG tab from there. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWOW Shelly,
ReplyDeleteThis is so awesome of you to host this. And THANKS to Suzie Townsend for her request.
Michael
What a great contest! Thanks for hosting it!
ReplyDeleteGreat workshopping idea and wow, great incentive!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a cool contest!
ReplyDeleteExcellent contest! I'll be tweeting it as soon as I get home!
ReplyDeleteAwesome contest! This is going to be the test of our Hollywood elevator pitch skills. Yikes!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a really awesome opportunity for all of us! Thank you so much for having this wonderful contest! :)
ReplyDeleteMine is up! Thanks for the great opportunity!
ReplyDeleteSounds fun. I'm honing right now
ReplyDeleteThis is one of those insanely cool opportunities. Thanks, Shelley! And hi to all the familiar names up there. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a great contest!
ReplyDeleteWoW, thank you both so much. This is sort of like a dream oppertunity, and hey I have gotten lots of practice smooshing things until thye fit in 140 characters or less.
ReplyDeleteNow I can tell my husband my twitter addiction was good for something.
Thanks again!
Thanks for hosting the contest, Shelley. It's a pleasure to be one of your twitter followers. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is a great competition with an amazing prize. Congrats on all the new followers. I found you, and your competition through Twitter. I now follow you on Twitter and I'm a follower of your blog too. I'm looking forward to writing a mini-pitch ;)
ReplyDeleteI'm excited! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea for a contest! This is going to be quite a challenge. I'm looking forward to reading all the Twitter-pitches!
ReplyDeleteThank you for this wonderful contest! I love Twitter, but am not the best pitcher, so this will be interesting! Thanks again and congrats on your followers.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for having this contest!
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome opportunity! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWow, this is utterly cool. I'm in!
ReplyDeleteguess I better get busy with that pitch
ReplyDeleteGreat! I've been working on a Twitter pitch! This will be fun! Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteThis sounds too good! I am going to give this my best effort!
ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome contest + blogfest! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteGreat contest! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWOW! What else is there to say? : )
ReplyDeleteYeah yeah!
ReplyDeleteVery exciting contest!
ReplyDeleteThank you for this wonderful opportunity!
ReplyDeleteWould we be able to take a raincheck for the prize if we won? Thanks x34859 for this contest! And CONGRATS (200 now, I see)!
ReplyDeleteHi Karen - Thanks for commenting! The contest is open to unagented writers with completed manuscripts because the prize is a full manuscript request. So, the mansucript being pitched should be the one that is polished and ready to go should she pick you as the winner. :) Thanks for entering!
ReplyDeleteGreat contest! Will be sure to spread the word
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for this event, Shelley! Its win/win since whether one gets the grand prize or not they still get tweet crits. I found you from a tweet- further evidence that social media is awesome. I'm now a "follower" of you and your blog. (follower still makes me laugh a little- like your a guru or something) Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHiya - just noticed a lot of ppl came to my blog but couldn't leave comments. Problem solved! :D Headed to read some pitches!
ReplyDeleteGreat contest! Thanks, Shelley.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the contest!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for this opportunity! After years of stretching my word count, it was fun shrinking it down. Good luck to all!
ReplyDeleteShelley, this rocks! Thanks to you and Suzie!
ReplyDeleteGood Luck to all!
Awww, wish I could enter, but Suzie already has my full! Great contest, though, and I'll have fun looking at the rest of the pitches :)
ReplyDeleteThis is great! Following you on twitter.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great contest! Very challenging and fun. I blogged about it and mentioned on twitter a couple of times @mindeearnett. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteSo much fun! Thanks, Shelley!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great contest! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great contest and opportunity! Thanks so much!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shelley for hosting this contest! It is awesome!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great contest! Thanks Shelley and Suzie for your time in putting this together.
ReplyDeleteI'm a bit late to the party, but my pitch is up and begging for critiques :)
Christi Corbett
Great idea. Fascinating way to pitch! Thanks for opportunity.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on all your followers!
I'm way late to the party, but I am here with my best pitch and selling smile. Thanks for such a unique contest, Roland
ReplyDeleteGreat idea! Your blog looks amazing and thanks for the opportunity.
ReplyDeleteFantastic idea! I'm tweeting it now.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the contest.
ReplyDeleteNew follower! What a wonderful opportunity. Now I'll be spending hours on 140 words. Yikes!
ReplyDeleteThanks to all involved!
Marie at the Cheetah
Thanks so much, this is a great idea. Can't believe I am so late. Thanks again to Christi Corbett, she keeps me on my toes :)
ReplyDeleteQuestion is it okay to use & instead of writing and. I'm trying to save characters!
ReplyDeleteI'm late to the party, but very excited. Thanks for hosting this contest!
ReplyDeleteI signed up too late to do the blog critique, but I'm getting feedback on Twitter. :) Thanks for the great contest!
ReplyDeleteWhatever happens I appreciated the contest because it gave me practice of pitching which is difficult but I am conffident will get better with practice.
ReplyDelete* Title, Genre and Word Count
ReplyDeleteZTD (ZOMBIE TRANSMITTED DISEASE): A TALE OF FATAL ATTRACTION
YA URBAN FANTASY
54,000 words
* Your polished 140 character twitter pitch
Jenny O' looks for love, but finds the half-life instead. Now it's #virtue vs. #zombie; and whichever wins, life as she knows it will end.
* Where you follow me (blog/twitter). Please include your twitter handle.
both @sb_springer
* Link to where you spread the word (twitter/blog etc)
www.scottspringer.com and @sb_springer
* Your email address where you can be contacted.
scott@scottspringer.com
1) Transformations, Adult Fantasy, 86500 Word Count
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"From Salem 1692, transported to a fantastical realm, 5 teens must find the key to saving the world from disaster, before it finds them first"
3) Twitter @johndejordy
4) http://lumadian.com/ Blog post: "The Nature of Summaries" (also on twitter)
5) jdejordy@gmail.com
Note: My #2 does not include the quotes. They are there to qualify everything that is included
ReplyDeleteTitle: Faux Paw
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA Urban fantasy
Word Count: 70,000
Socially inept Faux only wanted a boyfriend, until she burst into flame and initiated the apocalypse. Now all she wants is to go home.
Following on Twitter (cc4900) and blogger.
http://crystalcollier.blogspot.com/2011/04/goodbye-cheese-hello-blogfest.html
crystal@immortalthemusical.com
Oh man, I wish I would have found this earlier. No time left to conjure up a good line. Awesome contest. Suzi's been on my list for awhile. I plan to stalk her later in the year. Good luck everyone. BTW: new follower, love your blog.
ReplyDeleteI believe you wanted this here although it is full of other comments...
ReplyDelete"The Event"
YA Sci/Fi Fantasy
96k words
Dawn survives the suns remapping of earth,so many others didn't. No one could see the changes as myths and prehistory starts walking again.
139 chars.
I follow you on Twitter @Scorpedo
I have tweeted this so many times... http://bit.ly/heMIzU
I can be reached at jamieheppner@hotmail.com
Thanks for the chance!
Title : THE LEGEND OF VICTOR STANDISH
ReplyDeleteGenre : YA Urban Fantasy
Length : 64,000 words
TWITTER PITCH :
In the French Quarter, a modern Artful Dodger is taken in by an undead jazz club owner and finds love with a ghoul Jane Erye.
I follow you both on your blog and on your twitter account. My twitter name is rxena77.
I spread the word about your contest on this post of my blog :
http://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2011/04/hibbs-b-is-for-be.html
I can be contacted at rxena77@yahoo.com
Title: A SAFE PLACE IN HELL
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA/Dystopian
Word Count: 74,000
Pitch: Eddie shot a soldier—genius move. Self-defense doesn’t matter to the army. He escapes into the deadlands but he can’t escape them.
I follow you both on the blog and on Twitter (@jefishere).
I spread the word here: [http://twitter.com/#!/jefishere/status/52814296941465600].
I can be contacted at jefritz4@gmail.com.
Great contest! Thanks!
Title: Outcast
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA Contemporary
Word Count: 87,500
She wasn’t supposed to fall for Chad; he was part of the revenge plan. But Noelle risks friendship, love, and self to get even with Trina.
Blog and Twitter follower (@narrawriter)
Spread the word at http://www.susanoloier.blogspot.com
(http://susanoloier.blogspot.com/2011/04/shelley-watters-140-character-pitch.html)
Email: hatfield98us (at) yahoo (dot) com
Thanks for the contest, Shelley!
Love this idea, didn't get in here, but will now work on a 'twitter pitch' for future reference :)
ReplyDeleteWagging Tales - Blog for Writers
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ReplyDeleteHere's Mine:
ReplyDeleteA neglected girl creates a fantasy world where she's a gun for hire. In life, she's abandoned by all and tries to be a mercenary for real.
Semi~Normal
ReplyDeleteYA Contemporary Fantasy
74,000 words
When elf and rebel leader, Farix, is struck by magic meant to kill him, no one expects it to send him to a strange place called Earth.
Following Blog.
Spread word via Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/home.php#!/profile.php?id=100001578806568
wildhorsesrunningfree@yahoo.com
Title: Fractured
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA Contemporary
Word Count: 58k
Meredith overlooks Kaden's temper and his fists willing to sacrifice all she is until she finds out she's pregnant.
I follow on twitter and GFC brandileigh2003
http://twitter.com/#!/brandileigh2003/status/54672889802264576
brandileigh2003@yahoo.com
This is mine:
ReplyDeleteSongbird, A Third Eye Mystery
Mystery w/light romance
WC: 80,000
In a salvage yard Toni finds a jewel case that reveals a macabre treasure & sends her on a maddening search to find the mystery of Songbird.
Twitter: http://twitter.com/tonifois
I follow you on twitter and on this blog. You can find me on: ramblingsfromtheleft.wordpress.com
I have spread the word on my blog and on twitter.
Thanks for the opportunity.
Title: Undisturbed
ReplyDeleteGenre: YA Paranormal
Word count: 73,000
For 10 years Deyan has been given a prescription to hide the signs that she's an Iyles, a hunted species, and they're getting closer to her.
I tweeted and blogged: www.myblossomingmind.blogspot.com
Tetoniadoss@gmail.com
An awesome contest, and that was a neat little form!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great contest!
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